Eduardo


















































The Grizzly Bear

Huge body booming

Roaring fiercely

In a grassy field

Strong paws, dark fur

Selfishly striking a careless fish

on a river bank







  



4 comments:

  1. Eduardo, I really enjoyed your deductions about Ancient Egypt. Do you think cats were an important part of Egyptian life?
    Neil

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  2. Eduardo I loved looking at your Ancient Egyptian artefacts write-up. How did you do that? It doesn't look like you used a pen and paper.

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  3. I thought your message was totally right! I also think people really need to think more carefully about animal welfare. NW

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  4. I really like your poetry bear and I really like your map.william

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