Liam






















































The largest Tiger

Smooth, furry body

Moves quickly in the jungle

Burning flames of black and orange fur

Hunting angrily into the jungle

Speedily hunting for food

Silently stalking it's prey

in the deep, dark jungle











4 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 November 2014 at 01:55

    Liam, I really like your adverbs,adjectives and verbs.

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  2. Anonymous7 December 2014 at 20:16

    I love how you,r philosophy message made so much sense Dito

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  3. Anonymous7 December 2014 at 20:27

    the poems was great.NB

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  4. Anonymous7 December 2014 at 20:27

    I think your PowToon verbs were great Liam!They were not just obvious,but they are words that some people can use.MO

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