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The Polar Bear

Fluffy soft fur

Strolling on freezing ice

like a giant walking on a cloud

Pointy black ears

Slowly, gently moving

Hunting for fish

in the deep blue sea

By Leila












11 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 October 2014 at 21:32

    Good work, Leila. I particularly like the drawing of the bottle. Was it one of ours? I was wondering at first what the inspiration for the letter was. I was relieved to find out that it was based on a story that you read.

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  2. Anonymous12 October 2014 at 20:13

    I like your poem about the polar bear. (Leila's dad)

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  3. Anonymous4 November 2014 at 20:27

    I really liked how you sketched your first bottle and how followed the instructions on the drawing a bottle. Theo

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  4. Anonymous5 November 2014 at 02:40

    I really liked the second bottle that you drew. I especially like the shape of the bottle. Lisa

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  5. Anonymous1 December 2014 at 04:40

    Good writing, Leila. Keep it up. Dad.

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  6. Anonymous7 December 2014 at 20:20

    Leila I like how you worked hard one your study! Keep it up!
    RA

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  7. Anonymous7 December 2014 at 20:25

    Dear Leila ,
    you have really good ideas and very neat handwriting.
    from Maya

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  8. Anonymous7 December 2014 at 20:29

    your spelling rules were very good very good OP

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  9. Anonymous18 January 2015 at 23:44

    Dear Leila,
    I looooved reading your spelling rules! It was very clearly set,and it was very
    interesting.Well done!
    Ayumi

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  10. Anonymous23 April 2015 at 05:22

    Welll done Leila
    Uncle Matthew

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  11. Anonymous23 April 2015 at 20:14

    Good work Leila.

    Dad

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