Today we wrote some brilliant poems for our new poetry unit on Shape poems. I think you will agree that they are very descriptive!
The Crane
Feathery elegant wings
Gliding across the frozen ice
like ice skaters skating in the sun
Tall thin legs and long neck
Flapping it's wings above in the sky
drinking the fresh water
by the river under the sparking sunlight
By Karen
The Bull
Terrible razor sharp horns
dashing through open fields
like a speeding bullet
Deadly, mighty legs
Attacking fiercely
Butting animals
In the dangerous wild
by Mateo
The Poison Dart Frog
Huge, Dark eyes and a bright body
Hopping between the enormous Amazon forest
as miniscule as a field mouse
Dainty body and tiny legs
Leaping nervously through the forest
Searching for food
Amongst the tough green surface
By Maximo
The Arctic Fox
Popped up ears, itsy bitsy paws
Running swiftly through the snow
like the wind blowing some sugar
Trembling tongue
almond shaped hungry eyes
searching for prey in the endless arctic
as freezing as an iceberg
By Maya
The Polar Bear
Fluffy soft fur
Strolling on freezing ice
like a giant walking on a cloud
Pointy black ears
Slowly, gently moving
Hunting for fish
in the deep blue sea
By Leila
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