A brave new world...

Dear all,
Last week we had an email Dojo Point competition to write the best setting description for this picture.

Photo credit: Ecologia dei media

Here are some of the entries. Which entry do you think should win the prize for best setting description?

A Safire blue sea souroned, A shooting city that streamed the city in to busynus, lightling streamed through the sky as if it would fall, fern grass made it look beautiful - Olivia

 

1. The thunder storm crashed with loud noise that will make everyone stay in the house.

2. The enormous London Bridge shone down from the terrible thunder storm.

3. Everything in London looks very dark and gloomy.

4. The terrifyying people were scared.

Rebecca

 

On the left side of the town there are lots of machines that the builders can use.

On the left side of the town it is stormy with lightning that is very strong so the builders can get it with a machine.

When the top of a tower is flat, a strong ship can go there when the force field is on.

On the side that has trees there is a special station that keeps lightning in.

On the right side of the river the trees are covering half of the town.

 

Leon

 

The shiny saphier blue water is under the bright ivory bridge and there are some corn shape tower with glass windows stand on top of the bridge. Boats are silver with a silver ball. The roads are dark grey with white lines in the middle.

William

Lightning bolts shot out of the sky while the battle ships glided in the air. The electronic buildings towered into the clouds like a airplane trying to fly to space which is miles away. Rivers gently swayed side to side as the steamboats engines roared. Miles away people could see the cars zooming in the distance. The people watched as the land was filled with joy and excitement. 

Mateo